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    Dan Spite
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    My story

    Post by Dan Spite on Thu Dec 31, 2009 5:46 am

    I made a story a few years ago to win a domain. It was only a small piece but a lot of enthusiasm was used to make it..

    The winter passed by slowly in the forest, and a gleaming mist covered a large expanse of ground. The young man went on by the forest until he finds incidentally what seemed to be an amulet of a kind. The amulet was perched among what was a small concrete bar.

    Never nobody had seen an amulet as twas. It shone by the mist.

    Among the concrete bar a small note was which read...

    " This amulet contains a strong power,
    Gods were immersed by it;
    That they were banished to an unfortunate death "
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    Re: My story

    Post by ~*dH*~ on Thu Dec 31, 2009 11:45 am

    EDITED

    The winter passed by, slowly, slowly in that very special forest, and a gleaming mist covered a large expanse of ground. A young man, around the age of 25, went on by the forest until he found what seemed to be an amulet of a kind. The amulet was perched among what was a small concrete bar.

    Never nobody had seen an amulet as twas. It shone by the mist.

    Among the concrete bar a small note was which read...

    "This amulet contains a strong power,
    It puts the viewer into a trance
    The Gods were so very immersed by it;
    That they were banished to an unfortunate death"

    OH AND BTW
    THERE ARE SCRUBS EPISODES ENTITLED:
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    Re: My story

    Post by Dan Spite on Fri Jan 01, 2010 4:19 am

    It is fine as it was written.
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    Re: My story

    Post by ~*dH*~ on Fri Jan 01, 2010 4:20 am

    Yeah it was fine, but I improved it.
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    Re: My story

    Post by bAm on Sun Jan 03, 2010 4:58 am

    I doo no g3t e@t

    Lol jk, veryy..deep lol.
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    Re: My story

    Post by Twist on Wed Jan 06, 2010 1:40 am

    Did you win?

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